Feedback Reflection
I did not receive any feedback on my second elevator pitch, and after self examination I chose to put a more conversational tone in my speech to hopefully show my enthusiasm and encourage the same in my audience.
Hello Melissa, I know how difficult it is to try and self-critique when there is no feedback provided in your previous post. With that being said, I think you did a fantastic job with your delivery and content choice for your 3rd elevator pitch. Your speech was clear and upbeat which made it easy to comprehend and attention grabbing. Your content was concise which made it easy to understand what your business concept is. Overall fantastic job!
Hello Melissa,
ReplyDeleteI know how difficult it is to try and self-critique when there is no feedback provided in your previous post. With that being said, I think you did a fantastic job with your delivery and content choice for your 3rd elevator pitch. Your speech was clear and upbeat which made it easy to comprehend and attention grabbing. Your content was concise which made it easy to understand what your business concept is. Overall fantastic job!